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“Daddy, may I ask you a question?” you inquired of your British father, Arthur, as he had just come home from work.  With the time being nine o’clock at night, you were awfully tired but determined to see your father before heading off to bed.  Arthur, however, looked dreadfully exhausted as his work day seemed to have taken a toll on him.  That being said, no cheery greetings were made between the two of you.  As he made his way to the kitchen, Arthur barely seemed to give you a glance.

“Sure, what is it dear?”  Quickly, you followed him into the other room, seeing as he was actually willing to talk to you tonight.

“Daddy, how much do you make an hour?”  A gasp left Arthur’s lips as his mind began to wonder why you felt the need to know.  He shook his head to rid himself of sleep, seeing as he could barely see straight.

“Why do you ask such a thing?” he questioned while setting his briefcase down on the kitchen counter.

"I just want to know,” you shrugged.  “Please tell me, how much do you make an hour?"

"Well, if you must know, I earn £100 an hour,” he answered matter-of-factly before heading over to the fridge to heat up some of your babysitter’s leftovers from the night’s supper.

 "Oh.”  With your head down, you then timidly asked him, "Daddy, may I please borrow £50?”  You noticed your father froze in his position in front of the opened fridge.  Needless to say, you knew him well enough to know that he was mad.  The reason for this behavior, however, was unknown to you.   Arthur stood up abruptly and turned towards you with anger quickly filling his eyes.

 "If the only reason you asked that is so that you can borrow some money to buy a silly toy or some other nonsense, then you can just march yourself straight to your room and go to bed. Think about why you are being so selfish. I work too hard every day only to end up coming home to this childish behavior."

Hoping not to irritate your father anymore, not a single argument left your lips as you quietly went to your room and shut the door.

Meanwhile back in the kitchen, Arthur sat down at the kitchen counter and steamed in his anger, causing it to rise with each second that passed.  Your questions were something that he was not planning on coming home to.  In fact, how dare you ask such questions only to get some money out of him?!

After about an hour or so, Arthur had calmed down, and started to think, “Maybe there was something she really needed to buy with that £50…and really, she doesn't ask for money very often.  Bloody Hell, why did I get mad in the first place?” Your blonde father quietly walked up to your room and opened the door.

 "___, are you asleep?" he asked, trying not to be too loud in case you really were asleep.

You peeked your head out from under the blankets and quietly uttered, "No daddy, I'm awake".  Arthur sighed as he opened the door further and let himself in.  Slowly, he sat down on your bed and gave you a look of remorse.

 "I've been thinking, maybe I was too hard on you earlier. It's been a long day and I took out my aggravation on you.”  Your dad then reached into the front pocket of his trousers and pulled out a piece of paper that you soon recognized as money.  “Here's the £50 you asked for."   You quickly sat straight up, and smiled in delight.

 "Oh, thank you daddy!" you exclaimed, grabbing the money from his hand.

 Then, reaching under your pillow you pulled out some crumpled up bills. Arthur, seeing that you already had money, started to get angry again. You slowly counted out your money, and then looked up at your father with a big smile.

"Why did you want more money when you already had some?" your dad growled.  You, too happy to care, looked past your father’s anger and continued to grin.

"Because I didn't have enough, but now I do.”  Gathering up all of the money that you had stocked up, you held it all out to your confused father with outstretched arms.  "Daddy, I have £100 now.  May I buy an hour of your time?” you asked with pleading eyes.  Arthur’s eyes widened in shock as he seemed to become breathless.  When he didn’t say anything, you continued on and elaborated more on what you wanted from him.  “Please come home early tomorrow. I would like to have dinner with you."  Arthur was crushed. He put his arms around you, his tiny little daughter, as he begged for your forgiveness.

“I’m so sorry ___,” he sobbed into your small shoulder.  Arthur continued to cry after realizing how dreadful his life had become, revolving around his job and focusing so little on you.  He felt truly awful for how he treated you, his only child.  In the end, you didn’t want money, or a new toy.  All you wanted from him was some more time.

I need to stop getting story ideas from Facebook.  :XD:  Lol, so yeah, I found a really cute story on there that went in this format and I thought it was just the sweetest thing. :aww:  The only character I saw this working out with though was England…that and, well, I need to face the music…he’s one of my favorite characters in Hetalia. :D  That’s not the reason I picked him though.

I picked England because he’s the type to get angry rather quickly, but he’s also the type of man to get emotional when his child asks to spend more time with him.

The story concept doesn’t belong to me, however the actual written story does (I changed a few things in the dialogue as well as added descriptions as to how this whole story plays out).  Also, Arthur doesn’t belong to me, he belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya.

As an added note, I changed the unit of currency from ‘$’ to ‘£’ because…Arthur’s British…he earns British pounds at his job…and let’s pretend you both live in the UK, okay?  Nuff said. :XD:

All favorites and comments are appreciated! :)
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:iconnerdygummybears13:
nerdygummybears13 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member
AND THEN....THE WORLD HEARD A HUGE CRACK....AND WHAT MIGHT THAT CRACK BE YOU ASK?.......EVERYONES FEELS..........XD
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MysticalDreams18 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist
Bahahaha, that's all anyone keeps talking about on this story's comment section: how their feels are breaking/cracking/combusting/etc. :XD:  I'M SORRY I KILLED YOU ALL. *dramatic crai*
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nerdygummybears13 Featured By Owner 11 hours ago  New member
it is alright my friend. I think it was suppose too. so if they did. you did great.  and now. a random cat. ram. thing. Mustache Poro Icon/Emote  XD and more. cats. Seizure Kitty Dance Kitty Sebastian plz Kitty Glasses   kitty Kitty Cat 2 Cat blob Blair Kitty :animation: Kitty Dance kitty nums TheDancingKitten Hello Kitty Bounce Kawaii Kitty Hamster Avatar/Icon Free To Use! Sleepin kitty emote Cat Bread Face Raver Kitty Icon :meowthla: Seizure kitty emote Kitty And Dog Emote Kitty Pink Kitty LMFAO kitty Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Neko Dance) [V6] Kitty Face Plz  That is all. thank you. XD 
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MysticalDreams18 Featured By Owner 4 hours ago  Hobbyist
Lol, but I'm allergic to cats. :ohnoes:
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kittyface2048 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member
I still have not returned from my trip to Feeledelphia in the Feelipines
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:iconnerdygummybears13:
nerdygummybears13 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member
that's the truth ;-;
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Lizana66 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And thus you can hear a distant crack of my feels. :slowclap:  Congratz on destroying my feels.
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MysticMystiroios Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  New member
THE FEELS!! My heart is acing! IM CRYING!!! I love this..!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😭😭
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coolgrl1234 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  New member
I saw this on face book a few years back!!!!! (without the hetalia part) This is so cure im so glad you wrote this!
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  New member Student General Artist
Aw! So adorable! :D
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Ilovehetalia224 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  New member
i love it i want more
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Kaylagab Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
DA FEELZ! Well done. I love these stories.
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jackcatnip Featured By Owner Edited Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
hey if you got this idea from Facebook then don't stop using facebook :) This is amazing
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MysticalDreams18 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist
Hahaha, thanks!  :D
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jackcatnip Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
no problem :)
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TurtleAttacksTomato Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
Im fucking sobbing my eyes out!!!
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JackFleutie Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Student General Artist
You made me cry dude, CRY! But very good fanfic for that, i usualy dont cry easily. Good job! Your fanfics are very good, keep the good work!
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MysticalDreams18 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist
Aw, I'm sorry. :icontissuesplz: But hey, there are no brakes on my feel train. :XD:  I'm glad you enjoyed the ride though~!  As for the rest of my stories, holy crap. Thank you so much for your kind words! :excited:  They motivate me to keep going. :meow:
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JackFleutie Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Student General Artist
Don't mention it dude!! It's just the truth! Your awesome! XD
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Spiderstar0902 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist
That is so cute. You made me cry. The FEELZ. 
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MarnieAngela24 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
the feelsCry forever 
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ramendangosenbei Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
I'm crying 
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NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Student Filmographer
Reader-chan is smart for a child xD
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chica105 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  New member Hobbyist Photographer
ooooooh that was adorable or as china would say"sooooo~ cute"
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Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I remember reading something similar to this before. Don't know where though.
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MysticalDreams18 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist
Hahaha you might have read it from Facebook.  That's where I got the idea from.
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Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah. Probably. :meow:
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xxScribbleChanxx Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist
BEAUTIFUL!
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MysticalDreams18 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist
Thank you! :meow:
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KirahIsCool Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Student Filmographer
this..... is beautiful





buut my real dad would spank me if i asked for money 0-0, which i have never so i wont do it
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PaigeLove1 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That is why I ask my mom for money! England (Laughing) [V3] Kao Emoji-27 (Laughing) [V2] :moneyshower: 
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KirahIsCool Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
XD exactly
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PankakeCarnivor Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student
England just broke my heart...so mean Miuna Crying Icon and poor America had to put up with THIS all the time? How horrible *sobbing in the corner*
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fairytailgirl98 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
I have read this about 8 times and it still is one of my favorite England one shots
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MysticalDreams18 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist
Aw, thank you~!  I'm glad you like it that much. :)
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LilWolfQT Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I could see myself doing that o-o 
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FelicianaVargas98 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Poww right in the feels... *cries for days* ;-;
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the-tamer0katelynn Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is like the 300th time ive read tihs.....it still gets me! X'(
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fairytailgirl98 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
My feels man my heart hurts. I think i heard it brake 💔
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DarkMagician873 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
BROKEN FEEEEEEEEEELS TTWTT but that was beautiful
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cryingcinnamonpie Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014
this is literally the sixth time i read it and i never get tired of it every time i read it
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MysticalDreams18 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Hobbyist
Aww, why thank you! :blush:  I'm glad it has that everlasting-sadness effect. haha
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JessCG Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
Almost cried there...
Nice story
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jliscool2013 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Student General Artist
MEEEEEHHHHH!!! *ehem* great story.... D:
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Written-Note Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nearly cried!
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allaroundnerdy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014   Filmographer
Soooooooooo CUTE~!!!!!!!!! If I had a kid to ask for an hour of my time that way I would die on the insideHug Huggle! Heart the feels 
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Mari225 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If I had a kid, and they asked me for $50, I would flip my seat.
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MysticalDreams18 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Hobbyist
Lol, not sure if that's meant to imply that the kid would get absolutely no money, or that you would just give them ALL of the money you own.  Regardless, I love your comment.  It made me laugh. :D
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Written-Note Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
50 pence would be like 15-20 dollars
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:iconmari225:
Mari225 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would still flip my seat XD
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